Wednesday, July 03, 2013

Chris Eldin, a Light Snuffed

This is still a shuttered blog, but I wanted to speak here, because it was here on Blogger that I met someone who I've just learned is gone forever.

Chris Eldin was a zany person, a talented writer, and a lovely and warm human being. Those who knew her online have just learned that she committed suicide nearly a year ago.

I don't know any details beyond what I've read in the tributes from her online friends just coming out now, but I'm gutted. When someone disappears from the internet, it doesn't necessarily mean anything--I'm proof of that. But it could. It could mean she's entered a dark place and can't reach out. It could mean she's being systemically cut off from her support system.

I wish, so much, we could have helped keep that star shining. We would have done all we were able to, had we known.

You mattered, Chris. We will miss the warm light that was you.


Sunday, January 01, 2012

Reading List - 2012

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Books I Read in 2012

(Ratings out of 10 - consider 6 to be the minimum of what I expect a published book to be.)

Among Others
by Jo Walton
Finished book on: September 13, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 5
Enjoyability: 6.5


The Last Four Things
by Paul Hoffman
Finished book on: August 14, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 7
Enjoyability: 7.5

The Left Hand of God
by Paul Hoffman
Finished book on: August 10, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 7
Enjoyability: 7.5

Advent
by James Treadwell
Finished book on: July ~26, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 6.5
Enjoyability: 7 

Broken Blade
by Kelly McCullough
Finished book on: July 10, 2012
Quality of writing: 6
Quality of story: 6.5
Enjoyability: 7

The Minority Council
by Kate Griffin
Finished book on: June 10, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 8
Enjoyability: 8

Casket of Souls
by Lynn Flewelling
Finished book on: June 3, 2012
Quality of writing: 7.5
Quality of story: 7.5
Enjoyability: 7.5

Twenty Palaces
by Harry Connolly
Finished book on: May 20, 2012
Quality of writing: 7.5
Quality of story: 8
Enjoyability: 8


Circle of Enemies
by Harry Connolly
Finished book on: May 18, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 8
Enjoyability: 8.5


The Way of Shadows
by Brent Weeks
Finished book on: May 12, 2012
Quality of writing: 7.5
Quality of story: 7.5
Enjoyability: 7.5


Blackbirds
by Chuck Wendig
Finished book on: May 5, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 7
Enjoyability: 7


The Alchemist of Souls
by Anne Lyle
Finished book on: May 2, 2012
Quality of writing: 7.5
Quality of story: 8
Enjoyability: 8
Comment: A cracking-good read!

The Once and Future King
by T. H. White
Finished book on: Apr 29, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 6.5
Enjoyability: 6.5
Comment: It took me forever to get through this. Well-written, endearing, but not really my cup of tea.

The Road
by Cormac McCarthy
Finished book on: Mar 13, 2012
Quality of writing: 9
Quality of story: 8
Enjoyability: 7.5

Perfume: The Story of a Murderer

by Patrick Suskind
Finished book on: Feb 28, 2012
Quality of writing: 8
Quality of story: 7.5
Enjoyability: 7.5

A Rope of Thorns

by Gemma Files
Finished book on: Feb 21, 2012
Quality of writing: 8.5
Quality of story: 6
Enjoyability: 6.5

Ready Player One

by Ernest Cline
Finished book on: Jan 22, 2012
Quality of writing: 6.5
Quality of story: 7.5
Enjoyability: 8

On Stranger Tides
by Tim Powers
Finished book on: Jan 22, 2012
Quality of writing: 7.5
Quality of story: 7.5
Enjoyability: 7.5

Monday, November 14, 2011

From The Query Goblin: "My Protector: The Calling" by Hope Roberson

Hope Roberson has graciously allowed the Goblin to massage the query for My Protector: The Calling. Please pop by and see/say what you think!


Author website: J. J. DeBenedictis

Thursday, October 20, 2011

From The Query Goblin: "The River" by Anonymous (literary fiction)

An anonymous author has graciously allowed the Goblin to massage the query for The River. Please pop by and see/say what you think!


Author website: J. J. DeBenedictis

Sunday, September 25, 2011

Don't Second-Guess Your Gut

Anyone who follows me on Twitter probably witnessed my abject geek-spasm at the possibility of seeing (as Sarah Laurenson phrased it) a flaming schoolbus cross the sky, i.e. the UARS satellite as it flamed out in the atmosphere. Y'see, it was gonna be passing right over me at the time it was estimated to be due to bite the atmosphere.

Unfortunately, UARS proved to be a ninja satellite. No one saw it sneak in. That tricksy metal minx.

But that's okay; I found something of equal geeky worth to tell you about tonight!

Wired posted this article about making hard decisions, which led me to this article about intuitive thinking

The second article mentions some interesting experiments, and the one I found most intriguing was where they noted that if you ask people to answer the following:
Are these sentences literally true?
-- Some jobs are snakes.
-- Some jobs are jails.
-- Some roads are snakes.
...their response times slow down measurably on the second and third sentences.

In fact, you probably noticed that effect yourself when you were reading the three sentences. The knowledge that the second and third may be metaphorically be true interrupted your determination of whether they were literally true.

That's because your "Type 1" (or "intuitive") thinking is very fast and often provides more information than is actually available. It's the type of thinking that makes associations, that provides leaps of logic, that fills in the blank spots.

Type 2 thinking requires more effort, but it gives you answers based on the evidence that is really there. To quote the article:
Type 1 is automatic, effortless, often unconscious, and associatively coherent ... Type 2 is controlled, effortful, usually conscious, tends to be logically coherent, rule-governed.
And this is why your brain slowed down reading the second two sentences. The parts of your brain responsible for Type 2 thinking were doing their thing, slowly and rationally, and then the parts of your brain responsible for Type 1 thinking got to an associative answer faster and blurted it out, so to speak.

Then, after that interruption, your Type 1 thinking resumed and got to the correct answer.

Now, that's not to say you shouldn't trust your Type 1 thinking. In fact, that's the point the first article makes: when it comes to making a decision based on very complex information, your intuitive, Type 1 thinking can often do a better job than your rational, Type 2 thinking.
[R]esearchers have demonstrated that the emotional system (aka Type 1 thinking) might excel at complex decisions, or those involving lots of variables. If true, this would suggest that the unconscious is better suited for difficult cognitive tasks than the conscious brain, that the very thought process we’ve long disregarded as irrational and impulsive might actually be “smarter” than reasoned deliberation. This is largely because the unconscious is able to handle a surfeit of information, digesting the facts without getting overwhelmed. (Human reason, in contrast, has a very strict bottleneck and can only process about four bits of data at any given moment.) When confused in the toothpaste aisle, bewildered by all the different options, we should go with the product that feels the best.
The article describes an experiment that showed this. The researcher gave a group of subjects information about a set of 4 cars. Each car was rated according to 4 criteria, for a total of 16 pieces of information.

The subjects who were given a chance to think rationally about the information chose the best car about 50% of the time, and those who were distracted with an alternate task, then prompted to make a snap judgement about the cars, faired worse.

But that was the "easy" decision. The researcher then repeated the test with a different group of subjects but he instead gave them 12 pieces of information about each car, for a total of 48 peices of information.

The subjects who were give a chance to think rationally about the information in this case did very poorly. They chose the best car less than 25% of the time, i.e. they performed worse than random chance.

The subjects who were distracted, then asked to make a snap decision, however, chose the best car 60% of the time.

When faced with too much information, your rational mind becomes overwhelmed, but the intuitive mind--your "gut" instinct--performs better.

Interestingly, a group of researchers who reproduced these results found you could also undo your correct "gut instinct" choice if you tried to think rationally about the decision later. Your Type 2 thinking would get muddled by the complexity and cancel out the sureness you had felt when your Type 1 thinking produced the correct result.

Remember when you were in school and took a multiple choice test? Didn't it always seem like, if you changed an answer, it always turned out later that the first one had been correct? That may have been because your intuitive mind provided an answer your conscious, rational mind couldn't figure out, but then your conscious mind second-guessed that insight.

I find it fascinating (and beautiful) that science can actually address things that seem so magical as flashes of intuition and gut instinct. Pretty nifty stuff, and I hope it will help me listen to my instincts better when I'm feeling confused by complexity!

Ooh, and just to tie it all back to writing, in this "Show, Don't Tell" blog post, I noted that you can trust the reader's brain to fill in details, provided you give it enough to base its predictions on.

Now I can back that up with science! What is happening is that if you give the reader's brain enough information to trigger their Type 1, or intuitive thinking, they will come up with a more complete picture than would be possible if they were assembling their understanding based only on the information you provide.

The principle of "Show, Don't Tell" is about triggering the intuitive mind.


Author website: J. J. DeBenedictis

Friday, September 23, 2011

From The Query Goblin: "Hard Nox" by Anonymous

An anonymous author has graciously allowed the Goblin to massage the query for Hard Nox, a YA Paranormal. Please pop by and see/say what you think!


Author website: J. J. DeBenedictis

Sunday, September 18, 2011

Callous Seducer of Good Books

I'm currently more than half-way through two great novels right now, which is odd because I'm usually monogamous about reading.

You see, I was going out of town for the weekend (to be fed to the point of rupture by my absolutely lovely mother-in-law), and I had neither enough of the first book left to guarantee not running out of reading material nor enough space in my luggage to take two books with me.

Thus, that first book--a solid and dependably-enjoyable sweetheart of seven-hundred pages whom I have been commited to for over a week, now--is unaware of the flashy hussy I picked up at the library and had a weekend fling with.

And that hussy? Well. Let's just say you can tell that novel has been read a lot.

Still, I know my first book will take me back and everything will be just as good as it once was--although I can't foresee being with the poor dear for much longer.

And my relationship with the hussy will also soon run its course. I mean, you don't exactly settle down with a fast little number like that.

Always more books in the stacks, my friends. Always more books in the stacks.

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Thank goodness for Twitter buddies! My friend Dale McGladdery caught something I might well have missed while I was away--my flash fiction piece Wetware Woes finally came up on Escape Pod.

This is a piece that started life as a winning entry for one of Janet Reid's contests. It's great to see it finally out! (And both weird and edifying to hear someone read what I wrote--Editor Mur Lafferty did a great job, but I'm not so in love with some of my odd-ball sentence constructions now, I tell ya!)


Author website: J. J. DeBenedictis

From The Query Goblin: "The Privileged" by Anonymous

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Author website: J. J. DeBenedictis

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