Total critiques posted: 111, by my count. I did a few more than that because of the false start, of course.
If anyone feels like returning the favour, my first page can be found HERE. Feel free to give as good as you got!
(PS - When you click the link, you will be taken to Nathan's blog initially, but if you wait a moment, the page should bamf down to my opening. I.e. don't worry: you won't have to go hunting through the thickets of comments for it. :-) )
It's a first draft, but I welcome all constructive criticism, and I thank anyone who is kind enough to leave me a comment.
Thanks again to everyone who offered their work up for scrutiny; it was both a pleasure and a great learning experience for me!