Naturally, he's going to completely kick my ass.
Prompt words: Panic, Deception, Scheme
Resulting Travesty of the Noble Art of Poetry:
Without deception,
He fell into a panic
The scheme had no savour
Thursday, January 08, 2009
*puffs up feathers and tries to look tough*
PJD has thrown down the poetry gauntlet and challenged me to pit my Three Word Wednesday haiku against his.
Naturally, he's going to completely kick my ass.
Prompt words: Panic, Deception, Scheme
Resulting Travesty of the Noble Art of Poetry:
Without deception,
He fell into a panic
The scheme had no savour
Naturally, he's going to completely kick my ass.
Prompt words: Panic, Deception, Scheme
Resulting Travesty of the Noble Art of Poetry:
Without deception,
He fell into a panic
The scheme had no savour
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8 comments:
nice, i like haikus. this shows a lot of dysfunction to me.. you need deception?
Floreta: Well, I'm not a he, so the person in the poem is hypothetical. :-)
Welcome to 3WW. I think you did a fine job going up against PJD.
I liked it. Looking forward to reading more, and good luck with the book!
I would have done a haiku also but I just hate counting syllables
anyway, I like the haiku, thought it fit your state of mind about PJD's challenge
ThomG: Thank you, and thanks so much for stopping by! That was very kind of you.
Angel: Thanks so much--for both sentiments!
Lissa: I do better counting syllables than being artistic, really. Thanks for your comment!
AAAAUUUGH! I read this while waiting for a plane, and they called boarding, and then I forgot to come back when I got back on line.
I am so sorry. What a lout I can be sometimes.
But ThomG is right. An honorable and right worthy effort against my haiku.
We shall meet again!
PJD: Hey, no worries. I am the queen of forgetting to go back and check blog posts. (I blame Google Reader. The rest of the world can blame my sieve-like memory.)
*salutes you with haiku-sword*
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